The Boston Marathon Bombings
5:14PM April 15, 2013
Upon rolling over and checking the time on my phone, I'm furious to find out that I overslept on one of the busiest days of the year. Anger quickly turns to shame, shame to self-loathing, and self-loathing to depression. I might as well check these messages and have a peek at Facebook while I wallow in my sorrow...
3:12PM April 18, 2013
I have to go to work....%$^&*#$ bastards! Well...Statistically, I am wayyy more likely to die in a car accident than I am from a terrorist attack*. Wayyy more likely to mugged** Anyhow, those guys must be farrrr away from here by now. Bet there are a lot of people who are still trying to flee to the airport....
10:47PM April 18, 2013
"Oh my god! Someone got shot at MIT!"
My head whips around,"What?!"
"Our campus security sends us alerts! They said someone got shot at MIT!"
Shaking my head, I suggest,"You guys might wanna pick another bar....."
I even heard that next years race will be bigger.....
**"According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics, 510 drivers were murdered on the job between 1992-98. Taxi drivers are also victim to more violent assaults (184 per 1,000 workers) than any other occupation with the exception of police (306 per 1,000) and private security guards (218 per 1,000)." OSHA
*"You are 1048 times more likely to die from a car accident than from a terrorist attack" -- infowars.com
Interesting post.
ReplyDeleteI like the timeline stuff with actual thought. Very creative and intense. I wish it went on longer, though, as things unfolded. It's too short, and I didn't get a greater sense of what was going to happen next. Keep it going!
I think you answered the first part of the instructions, but questions 2 and 3 were not clearly answered. I see how you infused some of it in the final paragraph. Try to separate these two answers into their own, clearly intended paragraphs. That way, it'd be more clear, and less sleuthing on the reader's part.
It's a good post - very creative - but I think it just needs to be longer. As the reader, I'm left wanting more.
GR: 87